Hi Maiki, those are very nice similes and I like how they flow as a sentence. She is as graceful as the wind is very beautiful and creative, good job. I like the background you have chosen as well. For fun I would try making similes for the people in your class like Maiki is as bright as a lightbulb. Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates
Hi Maiki, those are very nice similes and I like how they flow as a sentence. She is as graceful as the wind is very beautiful and creative, good job. I like the background you have chosen as well. For fun I would try making similes for the people in your class like Maiki is as bright as a lightbulb.
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nui,
Zana Yates