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The Haunting Pt1
Long long long ago there lived two people called Eva and Tane. Tane had a crush on Eva but was too scared to tell her. The next day Tane was heartbroken when he saw Eva and his best friend Mike holding hands. Mike was the only person who knew Tane liked Eva, so Mike started liking her. Tane made a plan to get Eva back, first it started with a makeover ... Three hours later Tane looked like a new person. The next day Tane asked Eva & Mike if they wanted to come to a HAUNTED HOUSE of course they said ¨Yes We'd love to!!¨ and so they set off together Mike & Eva were walking down the street their fingers interlocked, Tane was left out like the Ugly Duckling. His plan was falling into place like eggs in an egg carton.
In the Haunted House there were Melting clocks on the walls, A death bed in the corner. Everytime Eva got scared she jumped into Mike's arms which made Tane jealous. One of the “actors” pushed Mike into the death bed. Mike started dying from an illness that was on the bed. Eva started crying as she watched Mike die. Mike whispered to Tane “stay away from my Eva or else I will haunt you till the point you kill your self” Tane whispered back “You dont scare me” Just then Eva came over and asked “What *sniff*sniff* were you talking about??” She said, still sobbing. Tane held Eva´s hand and said “He told me to take care of you” “Ok…” She whispered. That night Tane heard a weird noise *BANG* *CRASH* It was Mike's ghost haunting him…
TO BE CONTINUED
